Explaining a Process -3

  To arrive at the Free Quaker Meeting House in the fastest way, just follow the directions below.  To start with, go west for two blocks from Visitor Center.  Next, turn right on the corner of Chestnut Street and Fifth Street.  Keep walking for one block, and you will see Free Quaker Meeting House on your left.

Explaining a Process -2

  You can implement an experiment to see whether the black is a better collector of solar energy than white.  Before you start, such materials as 2 tin cans, black and white paint, and a room thermometer should be prepared.  First of all, paint the cans-one black, one white.  Additionally, fill the cans with water.  What's more, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours.  As a final point, check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare.  To sum up, the result will prove that the temperature of water in the black can is the higher of the two.

Explaining a Process -1

  It is easy to pot a plant if you follow the right procedure.  To begin with, cover bottom of pot with small stones.  Then put two inches of soil on top of rocks.  In addition, make a  hole in center of soil.  Next, drop plant into soil.  After adding soil until it almost reaches top of pot, press soil down with thumbs.  Last but not the least, water plant.  In conclusion, read what is mentioned above, starting to pot a plant.

The Most Unforgettable Experience I' ve Ever Had -revised 2

  Among the numorous experiences I have had, there is one that I have treasured extremely in our memory and can't forget.  Last year, I took a trip to Taipei for a rock concert which I had been looking forward for a long time.  It was the first time that I went to a concert; as a result, I couldn't hide my gratification.  A few minutes before the concert began, my hands started to sweat.  What's more, I was so excited that I could even feel my heart beating quickly.  All of a sudden, the white curtain on the stage fell down with the fans screaming loudly, and I saw my favorite band singing a rock song with their touching voice.  At first, my mind went blank due to the shock.  "I can't believe it!  Is it true?  I really see them with my own eyes, instead of on TV.", I thought to myself.  However, at the next moment, my heart vibrated to their stirring performance, and I had an impressive night.  The concert gave a brand-new experience to me; thus, I'm still flushed whenever I recall the memory.  It is certainly the most unforgettable experience that will last for ages.

The Most Unforgettable Trip I' ve Ever Had

  Among the numorous trips we have taken, there must be one that we like it very much and can't forget.  Last year, I took a trip to Taipei for a rock concert which I had been expecting for a long time.  It was the first time that I went to a concert; as a result, I couldn't hide my gratification.  A few minutes before the concert began, my hands started to sweat.  What's more, I was so nervous that I could even feel my heart beating.  All of a sudden, the white curtain on the stage fell down with the fans screaming loudly, and I saw my favorite band singing a rock song with their touching voice.  At first, my mind went blank due to the shock.  "I can't believe it!  Is it true?  I really see them with my own eyes, not on TV.", I thought to myself.  However, at the next moment, my heart vibrated to their stirring performance, and I had an impressive night.  The concert gave a brand-new experience to me; thus, I'm still flushed whenever I recall the memory.  It is certainly the most unforgettable trip that will last for ages. 

A Dream I Have Had - revised 1

  It all happened in August 2004, when I went to bed after a tiring day.  In the dream, a haunted house appeared in my neighborhood; out of curiosity, my family and I tried to open the door to see what was in.  The moment we opened it, a lot of ghosts ran out.  We were frightened, running back home without delay.  However, they ran after us with horrible facial expressions and shouted, “We will catch you!”  When we arrived home and tried to close the door, a ghost grabbed my brother by the arm, eventually taking him away.  The sadness of losing my brother hit home.  I was overcome by fear, unwilling to think about what had happened.  Tears rolled down my face, what with the fright and the sadness.  I didn't know how important he was until I lost him.   This dreadful dream shows that how terrible when we're chased after and how sorrowful when we lost any of our family members.

A Dream I Have Had

        It all happened in August 2004, when I went to bed after a tiring day.  In the dream, a haunted house appeared in my neighborhood; out of curiosity, my family and I tried to open the door to see what was in it.  The moment we opened it, a lot of ghosts ran out.  We were frightened, running back home without delay.  However, they ran after us with horrible facial expressions and shouted, “We will catch you!”  When we arrived home, and tried to close the door, a ghost grabbed my brother by the arm, eventually taking him away.  The sadness of losing my brother hit home.  I was overcome by fear, unwilling to think about what had happened just now.  Tears rolled down my face; what with the fright and the sadness.  I didn’t know how important he was until I lost him.   This dreadful dream shows that how terrible when we’re chased after and how sorrowful when we lost any of our family members.