Describing a person -revised

  My best friend,Colin, got lost when we took a trip to Korea and went shopping at the Seoul Tower.  As a result, I hope the local people to lend me a helping hand and look for her with the following description.  To begin with, my friend, Colin, is a sixteen-year-old girl, and she's of average height and slender.  Besides, when she got lost, she wore a pink dress and a pair of red shoes, which made her look like a princess.  In addition, she has some obvious features, for example, the long and curly hair, big eyes,  long and slim legs as well as the white skin.  When it comes to her big eyes, they are so charming that they not only catch people's attention but also make her look friendly and cute.  Moreover, she becomes talkative and excited when she talks about rock bands or what she's interested in.  Last but not the least,she's a shy girl; thus, her face often turns red easily, which takes a long time to fade.  In conclusion, based on what is mentioned above, it will be more possible and clearly for people to find her.  If you have any news about her, please call the phone number: 0912345678.  Thanks.

Comparing - 2

  John Adams as well as Thomas Jefferson was alike in several ways; as a consequense, the following biographical informations are about both the two great president of the United States.  First of all, John Adams played an important role in the American Revolution, which was similar to Thomas Jefferson.  Moreover, they both were delegates to the Continental Congress.  What' more, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence; likewise, Thomas Jefferson was the signer of Declaration of Independence.  In addition, John Adams, the same as Thomas Jefferson, studied and practiced law.  Last but not the least, John Adams died on July 4 in 1826.  Similarly, Thomas Jefferson died on July 4 in 1826.  In conclusion, with the analysis of the two presidents, I believe that you have clearly known the informations which make them easily mistaked.

Comparing - 1

  When I was going shopping last weekend, there were two clothes catching my eyes.  One of them was sold in LOURIE'S, and the other one was in GREEN'S.  However, on account of the resemblance between them, I couldn't make up my mind to decide which one to buy.  To begin with, they were both machine washable.  Besides, the clothes in LOURIE'S was a blend of cotton; likewise, the clothes in GREEN'S was a blend of cotton.  Next, the former had sizes from 4 to 14, which was similar to the latter.  In addition, their colors were alike, and you could choose from the four colors, red, navy, white, green.  Most important of all, the clothes in LOURIE'S cost as much as the clothes in GREEN'S.  To sum up, with the descriptions above, you will find it obvious to know the similarities between them; as a result, I hope that you can lend me a helping hand to make the decision.  Thanks a lot.

Explaining a Process -4 (How to plan a trip) -revised

  As people all hope to have a wonderful trip, planning a trip in advance becomes an important preparation.  Here are some tips making it a simple task.  To begin with, look for a variety of information about where to travel.  Then take money, food, weather, flu, communication, people and so on into consideration.  After that, choose a destination which you regard it as the most suitable place for you, and don't forget to make  reservations for rooms at a hotel.  Besides, search for some details about the famous scenic spots there in travel magazines, newspaper or on the Internet.  Next, check your schedule, deciding the date and the length of the trip.  Furthermore, sum up what you have known, and make a list of what you should bring or buy.  Last but not the least, get down to arrange your package and look forward to an invigorating trip.  In conclusion, follow the suggestions above and you will find it easy to plan a trip.

My Favorite Season

  Amomg the four seasons in a year, summer is my favorite one because it has a variety of features attractive to me.  To begin with, on account of its torrid weather, it inspires me to be more energetic and have a desire to go outside and do sports, which is good for my health.  Moreover, in this special season, sunflowers, my favorite, as well as many other flowers will bloom beautifully.  Whenever I see them, they always encourage me to have a positive attitude toward my life.  In addition, when summer comes, I will be informed of by the cicadas singing in the trees, which makes me feel as if I were in the forests no matter where I am.  Last but not the least, when it comes to summer, watermelons are the first food that goes through my mind.  There's nothing better than eating the juicy watermelons in such a hot season, bringing me an invigorating feeling.  To sum up, based on these reasons, there are truly several kinds of enjoyment for me to experience, and that's why I love summer so much. 

Describing a person

  My best friend,Colin, got lost when we took a trip to Korea and went shopping at the Seoul Tower.  As a result, I hope the local people to lend me a helping hand and look for her with the following description.  To begin with, my friend, Colin, is a sixteen-year-old girl, and she's of average height and slender.  In addition, she has some obvious features, for example, the long and curly hair, big eyes,  long and slim legs as well as the white skin.  When it comes to her big eyes, they are so charming that they not only catch people's attention but also make her look friendly and cute.  Moreover, she becomes talkative and excited when she talks about rock bands or what she's interested in.  Last but not the least,she's a shy girl; thus, her face often turns red easily, which takes a long time to fade.  In conclusion, based on what is mentioned above, it will be more possible and clearly for people to find her.  If you have any news about her, please call the phone number: 0912345678.

Explaining a Process -4 (How to plan a trip)

   As people all hope to have a wonderful trip, planning a trip in advance becomes an important preparation.  Here are some tips making it a simple task.  To begin with, look for a variety of information about where to travel.  Then take money, food, weather, flu, communication, people and so on into consideration.  After that, choose a destination which you regard it as the most suitable place for you.  Besides, search for some details about the famous scenic spots there in tourit magazines, newspaper or on the Internet.  Next, check your schedule, deciding the date and the length of the trip.  Furthermore, sum up what you have known, and make a list of what you should bring or buy.  Last but not the least, get down to arrange your package and look forward to an invigorating trip.  In conclusion, follow the suggestions above and you will find it easy to plan a trip.