Best of the semester -3 (Discuss Cause -1)

  There has been a huge increase in population around the world over the past 150 years.  As for what brings about this, several elements are included.  To begin with, as a consequence of the better sanitation, the risk of getting sick has decreased.  What's more, poeple nowadays have learned a lot about sanitation and have practiced well to prevent possible diseases or flu.  In addition, food plays an important role in people's daily life, and thanks to the improved farming methods that produce even more various and better food, they enable people to absorb more kinds of  nutrients and provide people with strength and energy.  Moreover, on feeling sick, people can go to the hospital for a health check as a result of advances in medicine and health care.  The earlier the illness is discovered, the sooner people can receive appropriate cure or undergo an operation.  Last but not the least, due to the improvement of public hygiene, advanced technology, as well as other factors, fewer infant die and more people live longer.  To sum up, based on what are mentioned above, we can figure out how these causes lead to the increase in population.

Best of the semester -2 (Discussing Effects -2)

  Stanly Manufacturing's decision to open a large factory is inferred that it will lead to a big revolution to Acton.  As far as I am concerned, I'm in favor of it.  Hence, there are some positve effects that I think they ought to be understood by the residents.  To begin with, after its completion, it must provide the residents with more job opportunities.  As a result, instead of having to move to another city for work, not only can the people in the town breathe a sigh of relief about unemployment here but more people will be attracted to the town.  In addition, the residents will have more opportunities to deal with various kinds of people.  Thus, during the process of the interaction, they can make different friends who will not only vary their dialy lives but also broaden their horizons.  Last but not the least, with the increasing population, it definitely brings about the prosperity due to more frequent trades in the town.  In conclusion, owing to what are mentioned above, the residents should take all the viewpoints into account and they will know how many benefits they will obtain from it and then agree with the construction.  On the other side, Stanly Manufacturing should make enough preparations and implement some measures to set the residents' mind at ease.



Best of the semester -1 (Discussing Effects -1)

  There is no denying that almost everyone will fall in love with someone, and getting married is a form of life.  Nevertheless, one should give some thoughts to it first because it does require a great deal of courage and determination.  Bathed in love for over three years, I am determined to get married, which has both positive and negtive influence on my life.  To begin with, I'm necessary to leave the shelter of my parents.  I have lived with them for more than 20 years; as a result, there will be great diversity which needs a period of time to adapt to because of the brand-new life between my husband and me.  In addition, now that I start with my life in a new house, it's for sure that I will suffer from doing a variety of housework.  Thus, like all novices who have to learn to do this, I'm no exception.  Moreover, after entering another stage of life, not only should I  become more mature about both behavior and mind but I also should make every decision before thinking twice.  Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time.  As a consequence, we will face and get through all challenges and difficulties together.  To sum up, although I have met some challenges, I still satisfied with the marriage and lead a happy life.  What's more, I will hold the positive attitude toward it in the future.



Discussing Effects -2 -revised

  Stanly Manufacturing's decision to open a large factory is inferred that it will lead to a big revolution to Acton.  As far as I am concerned, I'm in favor of it.  Hence, there are some positve effects that I think they ought to be understood by the residents.  To begin with, after its completion, it must provide more job opportunities.  As a result, instead of having to move to another city for work, not only can the people in the town breathe a sigh of relief about unemployment here but more people will be attracted to the town.  In addition, the residents will have more opportunities to deal with various kinds of people.  Thus, they can make different friends who will vary their dialy lives.  Last but not the least, with the increasing population, it definitely brings about the prosperity due to more frequent trades in the town.  In conclusion, owing to what are mentioned above, the residents should take all the viewpoints into account and they will know how many benefits they will obtain from it and then agree with the construction.  On another side, Stanly Manufacturing should make enough preparations and implement some measures to set the residents' mind at ease.

Discussing Effects -1 -revised

  There is no denying that almost everyone will fall in love with someone, and getting married is a form of life.  Nevertheless, one should give some thoughts to it first because it does require a great deal of courage and determination.  Bathed in love for over three years, I am determined to get married, which has both positive and negtive influence on my life.  To begin with, I'm necessary to leave the shelter of my parents.  I have lived with them for more than 20 years; as a result, there will be great diversity which needs a period of time to adapt to due to the brand-new life between my husband and me.  In addition, now that I start with my life in a new house, it's for sure that I will suffer from doing a variety of housework.  Thus, like all novices who have to learn to do this, I'm no exception.  Moreover, after entering another stage of life, not only should I  become more mature about both behavior and mind but I also should make every decision before thinking twice.  Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time.  As a consequence, we will face and get through all challenges and difficulties together.  To sum up, although I meet some challenges, I still satisfied with the marriage and lead a happy life.

Discussing Cause -2 -revised

  When it comes to the factors that lead to the failure of  the music store belonging to Michael Williams, there are several reasons included.  To begin with, the place where the small music store is situated in is so remote from the urban area that it's possible to be ignored.  Moreover, the categories of the CDs are too limited; as a result, it is only attractive to people liking hip-hop and rock.  Besides, most of the residents in the Fairfax are in the age group over 40; therefore, they may prefer to other kinds of music instead of hip-hop and rock, which would enable the store to lose the opportunity to get their attention.  Futhermore, since it's a small store, the owner needn't hire too many employees, and if he cuts down on the cost of salary, he would save more money.  In addition, the open time doesn't correspond to when most customers might walk past it; thus, the open time should be put emphasis on weekends.  To sum up, in my opinion, Michael Williams ought to brood over what brought about his failure, and if he wants to start a new business, he can take the analysis above into consideration.

Discussing Cause -1 -revised

  There has been a huge increase in population around the world over the past 150 years.  As for what brings about this, several elements are included.  To begin with, because of the better sanitation, people won't be sick easily.  What's more, poeple nowadays have learned a lot about sanitation and have practiced well to prevent possible diseases or flu.  In addition, food plays an important role in people's daily life, and thanks to the improved farming methods that produce even more various and better food, they enable people to absorb more kinds of  nutrients and provide people with strength and energy.  Moreover, on feeling sick, people can go to the hospital for a health check as a result of advances in medicine and health care.  The earlier the illness is discovered, the sooner people can receive appropriate cure or undergo an operation.  Last but not the least, due to the improvement of public hygiene, advanced technology, and other factors, fewer infant die and more people live longer.  To sum up, based on what are mentioned above, they show several causes leading to the population increase.

Expressing an opinion -2 revised

  When it comes to whether students should wear uniforms to school, I am in favor of it.  To begin with, in my opinion, every student insists on his or her own style of clothes; as a result, if schools don't limit the students to uniforms, it will be a mess in the campus.  In addition, I find it convenient to recognize students of different schools; owing to this, they will behave themselves outside.  Moreover, now that it won't be a trouble to worry about what to wear the next day, it does save a lot of time on choosing the clothes every morning.  Last but not the least, since students all wear the same uniforms, the security in the campus will make both their parents and the teachers breathe a sigh of relief; it's because the strangers who may want to commit crimes will be easily recognized.  To sum up, I believe that the benefits of students wearing uniforms bring more than what I mentioned.

Expressing an opinion -1 revised

  With the popularity of Internet developing more and more widely, it provides people with a brand-new access to date with someone else.  Nevertheless, some people think of meeting people through online dating sites  as an inappropriate way.  On account of the following reasons, I'm against it, either.  To start with, the Internet is the virtual space; as a result, the rate of being cheated on the Net is definitely higher, and the criminals may regard it as another way to commit crimes.  For example, they will use a fake name, and tell a lot of lies on purpose to make people believe them so that it will be easier for them to get money from people.  In addition, meeting people through online dating sites limits people to a certain way of dealing with people; thus, they will lack the opportunities of communicating with others in person.  What' more, it confines us to express our real selves.  Most important of all, we can't have a variety of memories, the only kind of which will be sitting in front of the computer and typing words instead of creating such memories as playing water on the beach or taking a trip to a foreign country together.  In conclusion, humans are born to learn to interact with others; therefore, meeting people through online dating sites will keep us from that.

Discussing Effects -2

  Stanly Manufacturing's decision to open a large factory is inferred that it will lead to a big revolution to Acton.  As far as I am concerned, I'm in favor of it.  Hence, there are some positve effects that I think they ought to be known by the residents.  To begin with, after its completion, it must provide more jobs; as a result, not only can the people in the town breathe a sigh of relief about unemployment here instead of moving to another cities for work but more people will be attracted to the town.  In addition, the residents will have more opportunities to deal with various kinds of people.  Thus, they can make different friends which vary their dialy life.  Last but not the least, with the increasing population, it definitely brings about the prosperity due to more frequent trades in the town.  In conclusion, as a consequence of what are mentioned above, the residents should take all the viewpoints into account and they will know how many benefits they will obtain from it and agree with the construction.  On another side, Stanly Manufacturing should make enough preparations and implement some measures to set the residents' mind at ease.

Discussing Effects -1

  Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married.  Nevertheless, one should give some thoughts to it first because it does require a great deal of courage and determination.  Bathed in love for over three years, I am determined to get married, which has both positive and negtive influence on my life.  To begin with, I'm necessary to leave the shelter of my parents.  I have lived with them for more than 20 years; as a result, there will be great diversity which needs a period of time to adapt due to the brand-new life between my husband and me.  In addition, now that I start with my life in a new house, it's for sure that I will suffer from doing a variety of housework.  Thus, like all novices who have to learn to do this, I'm no exception.  Moreover, after entering another stage of life, not only should I  become more mature about both behavior and mind but I also should make every decision before thinking twice.  Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time.  As a consequence, we will face and get through all challenges and difficulties together.  To sum up, although I meet some challenges, I still satisfied with the marriage and lead a happy life.

Discussing Cause -1

  There has been a huge increase in population over the past 150 years.  As for what brings about this, several elements are included.  To begin with, because of the better sanitation, people won't be sick easily.  What's more, poeple nowadays have learned a lot about sanitation and have practiced well to prevent possible diseases or flu.  In addition, food plays an important role in people's daily life, and thanks to improved farming methods that produce more and better food, they enables people to digest various nutrients and provide people with strengh and energy.  Moreover, as a result of advances in medicine and health care, on feeling sick, people can go to the hospital for a health examination.  The earlier the illness is discovered, the sooner people can receive appropriate cure or undergo an operation.  Last but not the least, due to the improvement of sanitation, advanced technology, and other factors, fewer infant dies and more people live longer.  To sum up, based on what are mentioned above, they show several causes leading to the population increase.

Discussing Cause -2

  When it comes to the factors that leads to the failure of  the music store belonging to Michael Williams, there are several reasons concluded.  To begin with, where the small music store is situated in is so remote from the urban area that it's possible to be ignored.  Moreover, the categories of the CDs are too limited; as a result, it is attractive to people liking hip-hop and rock.  Besides, most of the residents in the Fairfax are in the age group over 40; therefore, they may not prefer to other kinds of musuc instead of hip-hop and rock, which would enable the store to lose the opportunity to get their attention.  Futhermore, since it's a small store, the owner needn't hire too many employees, and if he cut down on the cost of salary, he would save more money.  In addition, the open time doesn't correspond to when most customers might walk past it; thus, the open time should be put emphasis on weekends.  To sum up, in my opinion, Michael Williams ought to brooding over what brought about his failure, and if he wants to start a new business, he can take the analysis into consideration.