2011年9月6日 星期二
family background
My name is Lin, Jen Yi. I was born in a family with a harmonious atmosphere. Since was a little child, my parents have told me, '' A bold attempt is half success.'' As a consequence, they always encourage me to learn new things and not to be afraid of making mistakes because I will obtain a variety of experiences from both the success and the failure. My parents are not only good teachers to me but also close friends whom I can share all my happiness and sadness with. When I am in a delimma, I will find that they support and comfort me all the time; what's more, they provides suggestions for me, which give me power to meet the challenges. Brought up with my parents' careful concern, I have grown up as a responsible and honest person.
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回覆刪除Since was a little child I勒xD?
回覆刪除As a consequence, they always encourage me to learn new things and not to be afraid of making mistakes because I will obtain a variety of experiences from both the success and the failure.
<<As a consequence 和 because可以同時出現嗎?
personality 描寫的很好欸~
第二行 Since was a little child,...主詞勒?? XDDD
回覆刪除其他的寫的不錯^^
I will find that ~ //為什麼要用will?
回覆刪除其他我覺得還不錯呢 ((拍手:)
還有 你只寫到你爸爸媽媽 你也可以多寫其他成員對你的影響或是 跟你的互動
Since (I)was a little child, my parents (had) told me,才對喔=)
回覆刪除十分不錯喔!!!
不過可以在加上其他小時候的回憶...
來增加篇幅喔~~~