As people all hope to have a wonderful trip, planning a trip in advance becomes an important preparation. Here are some tips making it a simple task. To begin with, look for a variety of information about where to travel. Then take money, food, weather, flu, communication, people and so on into consideration. After that, choose a destination which you regard it as the most suitable place for you. Besides, search for some details about the famous scenic spots there in tourit magazines, newspaper or on the Internet. Next, check your schedule, deciding the date and the length of the trip. Furthermore, sum up what you have known, and make a list of what you should bring or buy. Last but not the least, get down to arrange your package and look forward to an invigorating trip. In conclusion, follow the suggestions above and you will find it easy to plan a trip.
開頭不同反響I like! .ˇ.
回覆刪除我覺得你寫的句子都很棒,不簡單~~ 讓我感覺它是篇有程度的文章!
整體來說很棒!!
回覆刪除以後我要跟真在一起出去玩~
我認為可以加一點例子之類的~
Besides, search for some details about the famous scenic spots there in tourit magazines, newspaper or on the Internet.
很喜歡這句(因為我沒想到這麼多~>_<)
記得定車票和旅館喔!!!
回覆刪除真是棒啊!!!
沒有甚麼可以改的~
內容也都交代清楚!!!
第一句寫得不錯耶~
回覆刪除而且......我找不到錯誤!!!
文章寫的很不錯喔XDDD
第六行 tourit magazines 沒有這個用法喔 而且是tourist :D
回覆刪除→travel magazine /tourism journals
其他的超棒唷!! 真是太利害了:)
很讚
回覆刪除-->不覺得這是簡潔有利的評論嗎?
我覺得開頭寫的很好,不會有陳腔濫調的感覺
回覆刪除整篇文章是我覺得目前寫的最好的喔=ˇ=
很清楚的交代每一個細節
不會有說不清楚的地方
開頭和結尾呼應
也不會虎頭蛇尾
很棒喔!