2011年6月12日 星期日

Discussing Effects -1

  Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married.  Nevertheless, one should give some thoughts to it first because it does require a great deal of courage and determination.  Bathed in love for over three years, I am determined to get married, which has both positive and negtive influence on my life.  To begin with, I'm necessary to leave the shelter of my parents.  I have lived with them for more than 20 years; as a result, there will be great diversity which needs a period of time to adapt due to the brand-new life between my husband and me.  In addition, now that I start with my life in a new house, it's for sure that I will suffer from doing a variety of housework.  Thus, like all novices who have to learn to do this, I'm no exception.  Moreover, after entering another stage of life, not only should I  become more mature about both behavior and mind but I also should make every decision before thinking twice.  Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time.  As a consequence, we will face and get through all challenges and difficulties together.  To sum up, although I meet some challenges, I still satisfied with the marriage and lead a happy life.

8 則留言:

  1. Bathed in love for over three years, I am determined to get married, which has both positive and negtive influence on my life.
    這句寫的很棒,緊緊抓住主題effects唷~

    倒數四based on the love to my husband
    這句有沒有怪怪押@@?
    Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time. As a consequence, we will face and get through all challenges and difficulties together.
    這一段有離題的feel@@?

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  2. Bathed in love~這句話很美~有學以致用~great~
    我覺得這篇文章的節奏抓的很好~
    只是老師說要寫好或壞則一~你這篇有兩個都寫到~雖然很順~但還是符合標準會比較好吧~哈XDDDDD

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  3. 我覺得十分通順=)
    而且有把角色的心情加在文章中~
    讓人感覺妳好像有經歷過這些事XDDD
    十分的棒喔!!!
    Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time.
    還有這句阿~
    感覺就有把夫妻互相扶持的樣子寫出來><

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  4. 哇~~這該不會是你對婚姻的期望吧..
    這篇寫得不錯阿
    還有用像it does...這種強調的句型
    語句也很流暢~~

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  5. 很流暢喔
    對有興趣的東西寫的特別用心XD
    裡面有幾句很棒
    像這句I'm necessary to leave the shelter of my parents.的shelter用得很好
    不過你的文章流露出女主內的刻板觀念耶XD
    誰說女生一定要做家事呢B-)

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  6. Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married.
    >> Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married in their lives.
    >> There is no denying that everyone falls in love with someone and get married is a form of life.
    我覺得這兩個都可以~看起來句子會更漂亮唷

    as a result, there will be great diversity which needs a period of time to adapt
    >>as a result, there will be an adjustment which needs a period of time to adapt to (to我不確定~~)

    a variety of housework >> a pile of/piles of housework.
    講 variety感覺體做的家事很精采又豐富xD


    樓上的感覺室來踢館的好好笑xD
    真在是任勞任怨的可憐媳婦=))

    後面打的好感人喔
    我也要當你的老公XDDD

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  7. Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married.
    >>>你在說你嗎:>>>>>>

    Nevertheless, one should give some thoughts to it first because it does require a great deal of courage and determination.


    >>>說的好XDXD

    嬸嬸你結婚要發喜帖給我喔:>>>>>>>>>

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  8. 看來文章沒啥問題:D

    這篇塑造的夢想意境是咪咪想要的吧!!
    很夢寐以求的感覺呢!

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