Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married. Nevertheless, one should give some thoughts to it first because it does require a great deal of courage and determination. Bathed in love for over three years, I am determined to get married, which has both positive and negtive influence on my life. To begin with, I'm necessary to leave the shelter of my parents. I have lived with them for more than 20 years; as a result, there will be great diversity which needs a period of time to adapt due to the brand-new life between my husband and me. In addition, now that I start with my life in a new house, it's for sure that I will suffer from doing a variety of housework. Thus, like all novices who have to learn to do this, I'm no exception. Moreover, after entering another stage of life, not only should I become more mature about both behavior and mind but I also should make every decision before thinking twice. Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time. As a consequence, we will face and get through all challenges and difficulties together. To sum up, although I meet some challenges, I still satisfied with the marriage and lead a happy life.
Bathed in love for over three years, I am determined to get married, which has both positive and negtive influence on my life.
回覆刪除這句寫的很棒,緊緊抓住主題effects唷~
倒數四based on the love to my husband
這句有沒有怪怪押@@?
Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time. As a consequence, we will face and get through all challenges and difficulties together.
這一段有離題的feel@@?
Bathed in love~這句話很美~有學以致用~great~
回覆刪除我覺得這篇文章的節奏抓的很好~
只是老師說要寫好或壞則一~你這篇有兩個都寫到~雖然很順~但還是符合標準會比較好吧~哈XDDDDD
我覺得十分通順=)
回覆刪除而且有把角色的心情加在文章中~
讓人感覺妳好像有經歷過這些事XDDD
十分的棒喔!!!
Last but not the least, based on the love to my husband, I will support him all the time.
還有這句阿~
感覺就有把夫妻互相扶持的樣子寫出來><
哇~~這該不會是你對婚姻的期望吧..
回覆刪除這篇寫得不錯阿
還有用像it does...這種強調的句型
語句也很流暢~~
很流暢喔
回覆刪除對有興趣的東西寫的特別用心XD
裡面有幾句很棒
像這句I'm necessary to leave the shelter of my parents.的shelter用得很好
不過你的文章流露出女主內的刻板觀念耶XD
誰說女生一定要做家事呢B-)
Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married.
回覆刪除>> Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married in their lives.
>> There is no denying that everyone falls in love with someone and get married is a form of life.
我覺得這兩個都可以~看起來句子會更漂亮唷
as a result, there will be great diversity which needs a period of time to adapt
>>as a result, there will be an adjustment which needs a period of time to adapt to (to我不確定~~)
a variety of housework >> a pile of/piles of housework.
講 variety感覺體做的家事很精采又豐富xD
樓上的感覺室來踢館的好好笑xD
真在是任勞任怨的可憐媳婦=))
後面打的好感人喔
我也要當你的老公XDDD
Almost everyone will fall in love with someone and even get married.
回覆刪除>>>你在說你嗎:>>>>>>
Nevertheless, one should give some thoughts to it first because it does require a great deal of courage and determination.
>>>說的好XDXD
嬸嬸你結婚要發喜帖給我喔:>>>>>>>>>
看來文章沒啥問題:D
回覆刪除這篇塑造的夢想意境是咪咪想要的吧!!
很夢寐以求的感覺呢!