When I was going shopping last weekend, there were two clothes catching my eyes. One of them was sold in LOURIE'S, and the other one was in GREEN'S. However, on account of the resemblance between them, I couldn't make up my mind to decide which one to buy. To begin with, they were both machine washable. Besides, the clothes in LOURIE'S was a blend of cotton; likewise, the clothes in GREEN'S was a blend of cotton. Next, the former had sizes from 4 to 14, which was similar to the latter. In addition, their colors were alike, and you could choose from the four colors, red, navy, white, green. Most important of all, the clothes in LOURIE'S cost as much as the clothes in GREEN'S. To sum up, with the descriptions above, you will find it obvious to know the similarities between them; as a result, I hope that you can lend me a helping hand to make the decision. Thanks a lot.
red, navy, white, green. >> red, navy, white, and green.
回覆刪除其他都寫的很好喔
內容也很豐富^_^
兩個都好棒害我好難抉擇
回覆刪除(被巴XD)
文章很流暢且內容很豐富 :>
you could choose from the four colors, red, navy, white, green.主詞要一樣喔喔
回覆刪除這篇十分不錯喔!!!
回覆刪除有種輕快的少女感=)
結尾也讓人有想幫忙的衝動XD
文章的豐富度很ok喔~
回覆刪除每個文句不會有不流暢的感覺~
整體來說寫得很好喔!!
Great~
red, navy, white, green
回覆刪除// red, navy, white, and green.
as much as the clothes in GREEN'S
不知道可不可以// as much as the one in Green's
YA! 咪咪好棒100分XD
開頭跟結尾互相呼應好棒唷!!!
回覆刪除而且我覺得整體很順還是讓我覺得超好~~
開頭我真的好喜歡XD
!!建議你兩件都買XDD
倒數第三行 you could choose from the four colors, red, navy, white, green.
回覆刪除是red, navy, white, and green才對喔
其他的寫得很好阿 真的讓人覺得很難決定買哪件~