2011年4月20日 星期三

My Favorite Season

  Amomg the four seasons in a year, summer is my favorite one because it has a variety of features attractive to me.  To begin with, on account of its torrid weather, it inspires me to be more energetic and have a desire to go outside and do sports, which is good for my health.  Moreover, in this special season, sunflowers, my favorite, as well as many other flowers will bloom beautifully.  Whenever I see them, they always encourage me to have a positive attitude toward my life.  In addition, when summer comes, I will be informed of by the cicadas singing in the trees, which makes me feel as if I were in the forests no matter where I am.  Last but not the least, when it comes to summer, watermelons are the first food that goes through my mind.  There's nothing better than eating the juicy watermelons in such a hot season, bringing me an invigorating feeling.  To sum up, based on these reasons, there are truly several kinds of enjoyment for me to experience, and that's why I love summer so much. 

8 則留言:

  1. because it has a variety of features attractive to me

    是不是少一個which is在features後面阿@@~

    整篇文章寫的很詩情畫意
    有蟬鳴呢xDD

    寫的很寫實我喜歡XD

    PS 西瓜好吃+1 !!!!

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  2. as well as many other flowers will bloom beautifully.這句可以不用+will
    因為是事實嘛~用現在式就ok了
    看你的文章害我好想吃西瓜>w<

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  3. amomg→ among

    a variety of features attractive to me
    → a variety of features which is attractive to me

    寫的很棒欸!!
    都把你喜歡夏天的原因都寫出來
    讓我感覺其實夏天超棒的呢!
    還舉了向日葵和西瓜的例子真是名符其實的夏天了

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  4. 第一行Amomg 是among啦~
    第二行because it has a variety of features attractive to me. attractive前面要加which is

    其他部分寫的很好阿~每個句子都很長耶 而且幾乎沒啥錯誤XDD

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  5. 整個文章的感覺很有夏日風情的fu喔~~
    感覺真的很夏天~
    寫的很棒喔=ˇ=
    西瓜的確超符合夏天的感覺~
    選的例子很適合喔~~~

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  6. 第一個字錯了~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 好不容易才找到說 結果大家都有看到>"<
    其它都很好= 口 =!!!

    你寫的讓我都開始覺得夏天比較好了呢!!XD
    尤其是Last but not the least, when it comes to summer, watermelons are the first food that goes through my mind. 這句,我最喜歡!!
    你寫的理由大家好像都很少想到欸! 寫得好棒唷 ~

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  7. 寫的很好耶 !
    很有夏天的感覺!
    超棒的:>

    例子也舉的合適
    很棒 :>

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  8. 是Among喔~
    這是我唯一看到怪怪的地方= =
    真是太強了!!!
    而且...
    超夏天的啦~~~
    cicadas singing 和flowers will bloom beautifully這些都有好漂亮的感覺=)
    又更加進步的感覺!!!

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