Comparing - 2 -revised

  John Adams as well as Thomas Jefferson was alike in several ways; as a consequence, the following biographical informations are about both the two great presidents of the United States.  First of all, John Adams played an important role in the American Revolution, which was similar to Thomas Jefferson.  Moreover, they both were delegates to the Continental Congress.  What's more, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence; likewise, Thomas Jefferson was the signer of Declaration of Independence.  In addition, John Adams, the same as Thomas Jefferson, studied and practiced law.  Last but not the least, John Adams died on July 4 in 1826.  Similarly, Thomas Jefferson died on July 4 in 1826.  In conclusion, with the analysis of the two presidents, I believe that not only have you had clear ideas about them, but you have known why they were respected by the general public.