2011年5月29日 星期日

Contrasting -1 -revised

   My friend and I were so fortunate that we were both admitted to the best university.  As a consequence, we are now searching for an ideal place for us to live in the future.  After hours of comparing, we consider Fairfax Apartments and CAMPUS APTS the most suitable ones; nevertheless, there are some differences between them.  To begin with, whereas there are two large bedrooms in Fairfax Apartments , there is only one bedroom in CAMPUS APTS; however, it's in large modern building, and owing to whether we should share the room, we have to take this into consideration.  In addition, different from the latter, the former is air conditioned and furnished.  Moreover, it's not allowed to keep pets in Fairfax Apartments; in contrast, there is no problem for us to keep pets in CAMPUS APTS.  Last but not the least, Fairfax Apartments costs $1250 per month and it's available from Sept.1. On the other hand, CAMPUS APTS costs merely $900 per month and it's avaible immediately.  Based on the unlikeness above, we think that Fairfax Apartments is more satisfying than CAMPUS APTS, which is mainly on account of the bedrooms.

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